Saturday, October 12, 2013

Haiku Heights Prompt #304

Clouds

Carefree masses drift
but grief and wrath consume them.
Tears and Roars follow.

In response to the first prompt of October by Haiku Heights
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9 comments:

  1. Ramesh SoodOctober 13, 2013 at 12:03 AM

    Sometimes drifting takes them to happier places and emotions overwhelm and flow in tears...another posiibility...that's when one finds rains soothing..

    RS

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  2. UnknownOctober 13, 2013 at 8:27 AM

    'Tears and roars' the idea is fantastic.

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  3. Sanjana October 13, 2013 at 10:16 AM

    This is an excellent haiku. Clouds appear carefree yet they hold so much destruction and wrath. Thunder and rain personified as roars and tears is exceptional! Kudos!

    Pls visit: http://njn-sorceress.blogspot.in/

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  4. William RhosyrOctober 14, 2013 at 12:55 PM

    Amazing take — the wrath of a storm. Thank you!

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  5. AnonymousOctober 14, 2013 at 1:51 PM

    Like a thunderstorm. Very exciting.

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  6. PanchaliOctober 15, 2013 at 11:06 AM

    I could hear the thunder...:)

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  7. AnonymousOctober 15, 2013 at 12:20 PM

    Powerful and poignant

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  8. Gillena CoxOctober 18, 2013 at 7:18 AM

    most certainly, those awesome drifters, have a most dynamic life

    much love...

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  9. UnknownOctober 18, 2013 at 2:29 PM

    Lovely take on the prompt.

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    and http:/geetasfile.blogspot.com

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