Tuesday, September 24, 2013

Haiku Heights #298

Den

Amongst hungry wolves,
I traverse dark, low nighclubs
past ravenous eyes.

In response to the prompt Haiku Heights

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8 comments:

  1. Siggi in Downeast MaineSeptember 24, 2013 at 10:09 PM

    I like this a lot...intense
    peace
    Siggi

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  2. kalpana solsiSeptember 24, 2013 at 11:29 PM

    Scary place to be in a nightclub with hungry wolves. very good take on the prompt.

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  3. LocomenteSeptember 25, 2013 at 3:55 AM

    Different take on the prompt...
    Lovely!

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  4. UnknownSeptember 25, 2013 at 4:22 AM

    A unique and lovely thought!

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2013 at 4:22 AM

    Nice! I like the ravenous eyes. Great description of many a nightclub!

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  6. Sumana RoySeptember 25, 2013 at 7:17 AM

    a vivid portrayal.....

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  7. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2013 at 9:36 AM

    I enjoyed this - a clever take on the prompt.

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  8. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2013 at 10:10 AM

    wonderful metaphor

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