One Zappai Poet: Haiku Heights #299

Wednesday, September 25, 2013

Haiku Heights #299

Salt

Grin and bear our pain

as more is poured inside us.

A grim reminder

In response to the prompt by Haiku Heights

7 comments:

UnknownSeptember 25, 2013 at 11:58 PM
A beautiful contrast ,grin and grim, a result of salt!
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Ramesh SoodSeptember 26, 2013 at 12:12 AM
A very different take to the prompt..well done..

RS
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AnonymousSeptember 26, 2013 at 2:21 AM
Ah, salt in the wounds. Nice take!
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vivinfranceSeptember 26, 2013 at 3:23 AM
Subtle.
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UnknownSeptember 26, 2013 at 6:44 AM
salt
rightly prompted
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Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 26, 2013 at 7:33 AM
Grimness seems to be more prevalent these days...

Salt Cedar Blossoms
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Gillena CoxSeptember 26, 2013 at 8:30 AM
salt the stuff of tears; have a nice Thursday

much love...
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